Victims: Part 3 Preview - The First 100 Pages

The first 100 pages of Victims: Part 3 are complete!
Well, the rough draft is, anyway.
At this point in the writing process, I like to curate and find what I call "alpha readers". Alpha readers encompass anyone who wants to read the story so far and provide their meaningful feedback on what they've read!
Victims: Part 3 is looking to end up around 440 pages across 21 or 22 chapters. This first 100-page preview ends halfway through Chapter 6. I am aiming for a 2027 release, ideally in the spring or early summer.
If you would like to join the list of alpha readers, please email the subject line "Victims: Part 3 Preview" to:
Then, I will email you a PDF containing the first 100 pages. This PDF can be read via desktop, mobile, and Kindle devices! After a few weeks, I will follow up with a Google Form to ask for your feedback.
DO NOT ASK FOR A PREVIEW IF YOU ARE NOT WILLING TO PROVIDE FEEDBACK!!!!!
Your feedback is crucial to understanding any hooks, interests, pain points, etc. in my work so far. Please refrain from mentioning any spelling errors, grammar mistakes, repetition, etc. Please note this is a ROUGH DRAFT and much of this will be ironed out in future rewrites. For the initial draft stage, my primary concern is getting the story out of my head and onto the page; how it looks on the page can and will be edited later. I'm most interested in hearing your thoughts on the story so far, what interests you, where you see it going, if it's interesting, if it's boring, etc.
If you are interested, please email me at the address above. Thank you for your interest! I'm enjoying creating the next part in the Victims series, and am very excited to share what I have been cooking up.